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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics
i wrote a song to my girl friend and if some one can please please please help me fix the grammar ill be so thankfullllll!!!:-))))
this is the song
sweetie monkey charlie
in a days when i look upon your face i feel joy
sometimes i'm asking my self how is it possible
not to be next to this girl
your eyes makes you look unique and sometimes i just want to dive so deep
but still they are laying on a top of a mountain hill
your cheeks
where i can learn about power and know that he is excise
and how can i not
travel a bit more south to the place where
softness fragrances attraction and awareness collide
place where emotions taking a nice trip in the park
mornings you are tuff but this is part of the reason why
why why why
why i love you so much
im thinking about a seen that happen to me when i was a kid
swimming too far from the beach
in my head again and again
what would of happen if you were there
i guess i couldnt bread cause your heart beats would have pass me chills
a smile could of help but the thought i know you are there
could bring me back to shore
exosted but know ill get some love
mornings you are tuff but this is part of the reason why
why why why
why i love you so much
and the thing i love the most
is your hugs when you know I'm cold
you will always be in my heart my
puppy little champ
sweetie monkey charlie
in a days when i look upon your face i feel joy
sometimes i'm asking my self how is it possible
not to be next to this girl
your eyes makes you look unique and sometimes i just want to dive so deep
but still they are laying on a top of a mountain hill
your cheeks
where i can learn about power and know that he is excise
and how can i not
travel a bit more south to the place where
softness fragrances attraction and awareness collide
place where emotions taking a nice trip in the park
mornings you are tuff but this is part of the reason why
why why why
why i love you so much
im thinking about a seen that happen to me when i was a kid
swimming too far from the beach
in my head again and again
what would of happen if you were there
i guess i couldnt bread cause your heart beats would have pass me chills
a smile could of help but the thought i know you are there
could bring me back to shore
exosted but know ill get some love
mornings you are tuff but this is part of the reason why
why why why
why i love you so much
and the thing i love the most
is your hugs when you know I'm cold
you will always be in my heart my
puppy little champ
Top answer
Very sweet do capitalise words like "I" and starts of sentences; I've added a rudimentary punctuation, but as it's a song, punctuation is often less easy. sweetie monkey charlie (on/in the days / in a daze) when i look upon your face , i feel joy ; sometimes i'm asking myself how is it possible not to be next to this girl ... He exists); and how can i not travel a bit more south to the place where softness , fragranc e, attraction and awareness collide ?
- Very sweet do capitalise words like "I" and starts of sentences; I've added a rudimentary punctuation, but as it's a song, punctuation is often less easy.
- sweetie monkey charlie (on/in the days / in a daze) when i look upon your face , i feel joy ; sometimes i'm asking myself how is it possible not to be next to this girl ...
- He exists); and how can i not travel a bit more south to the place where softness , fragranc e, attraction and awareness collide ?
- (a/that) place where emotions (may) take a (nice -> use a different word) trip in the park ?
- mornings , you are tough, but this is part of the reason why why why why why i love you so much !
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Very sweet 
do capitalise words like "I" and starts of sentences; I've added a rudimentary punctuation, but as it's a song, punctuat
do capitalise words like "I" and starts of sentences; I've added a rudimentary punctuation, but as it's a song, punctuat
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