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Nick212 Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I writed a essay anyone can revise it for me ?
My english is poor ,so i need someone who can revise my essay !!
anyone can help me ?
My colleagues were talking about go to swimming recently.some guys said :" I want to do some exercise, I want to lost some weight ."Actually , I do not buy that.I thought they all want to see some pretty girls in bikini .So we decide to swim at the vacation of 5.1 .
It's not much time left ,We need get the stuff ready.So I went to shop to buy the swimming suit yesterday.I have not think about the price of swimming suit before.I thought it' must be 10 yuan or 30yuan at top.
So I went in the shop and pick up a nice looking swimming suit and tell the salers:"OK give me this one." The saler said :" Ok it's 138yuan ." I was a bit surprised :" What ?? a swimming suit need 138yuan ??"Then the saler said a lot of advantage of this swimming suit ,I was not listenning.I pick up the swimming suit and talk to my friend:" Is this swimming suit good ? and fitness ? Is it a little big for me?" I was hoping that he can know my mind and tell me that this bathing trunks is too big for me or it's not fit me ,So that I can tell the saler I do not want it ,I do not buy it.But unfortunately he said :" OH it's good and so sexy for you ." It's fucking bullshit .
Finally I bought this 138yuan swimming suit.The saler also said to me did u need some other stuff?I reply she quickly :" no no need just the swimming suit ."
anyone can help me ?
My colleagues were talking about go to swimming recently.some guys said :" I want to do some exercise, I want to lost some weight ."Actually , I do not buy that.I thought they all want to see some pretty girls in bikini .So we decide to swim at the vacation of 5.1 .
It's not much time left ,We need get the stuff ready.So I went to shop to buy the swimming suit yesterday.I have not think about the price of swimming suit before.I thought it' must be 10 yuan or 30yuan at top.
So I went in the shop and pick up a nice looking swimming suit and tell the salers:"OK give me this one." The saler said :" Ok it's 138yuan ." I was a bit surprised :" What ?? a swimming suit need 138yuan ??"Then the saler said a lot of advantage of this swimming suit ,I was not listenning.I pick up the swimming suit and talk to my friend:" Is this swimming suit good ? and fitness ? Is it a little big for me?" I was hoping that he can know my mind and tell me that this bathing trunks is too big for me or it's not fit me ,So that I can tell the saler I do not want it ,I do not buy it.But unfortunately he said :" OH it's good and so sexy for you ." It's fucking bullshit .
Finally I bought this 138yuan swimming suit.The saler also said to me did u need some other stuff?I reply she quickly :" no no need just the swimming suit ."
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- Don't leave a space after opening quotation marks.
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