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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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I would like yuo to correct this letter i have written below

Dear sir,
I kindly request for a 3 months maternity leave from 19th December 2013 to 19th march 2013 and during my absence i requested Jack and Fred to stand in for me .
I will be grateful for your favorable consideration.

Thanks

Jemima
  

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Dear Mr [surname], I would like to request 3 months' maternity leave from December 19th, 2013 to March 19th, 2014. I have requested Jack and Fred to substitute for me during my absence. I would be grateful for your favorable consideration.

  • Dear Mr [surname], I would like to request 3 months' maternity leave from December 19th, 2013 to March 19th, 2014.
  • I have requested Jack and Fred to substitute for me during my absence.
  • I would be grateful for your favorable consideration.
  • Thank you, Jemima
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Dear Mr [surname],

I would like to request 3 months' maternity leave from December 19th, 2013 to March 19th, 2014. I have requested Jack and Fred to substitute for me during my absence.


I would be grateful for your favorable consideration.

Thank you,

Jemima

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