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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
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I would be very happy if my sentences are corrected, thanks
I brought some plaster from the kitchen shelf and took the first aid kit from the cupboard, opened it up, cut out some roll bandage out of its reel, and then, soaked the roll bandage in it and fixated the broken leg with a body of plaster I prepared.
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org/dictionary/english/plaster#british-1-1-2 you should rewrite this part as: I got a plaster. org/dictionary/english/plaster#british-1-1-1 you should rewrite this part as: I got some plaster. osmancataloluk opened it up , You don't need "up" here.
- org/dictionary/english/plaster#british-1-1-2 you should rewrite this part as: I got a plaster.
- org/dictionary/english/plaster#british-1-1-1 you should rewrite this part as: I got some plaster.
- osmancataloluk opened it up , You don't need "up" here.
- osmancataloluk cut out some roll bandage out of its reel , This part is clumsy.
- ), osmancataloluk soaked the roll bandage in it soaked the bandage in it.
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osmancatalolukI brought some plasterIf you mean a plaster for wounds (also known as a sticking plaster) http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/plaster#british-1-1-2 you should rewrite this part as: I got a plaster.
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Thanks anonymus (Mr/Mrss??),
But it was not in the contexed of a hospital, My mother covered the leg of the raven with some soaked plaster and kept it one month then it healed the raven and it started to walk and soon it would fly but did not leave us. Do you now think that it is still clumsy???
regards
osman
But it was not in the contexed of a hospital, My mother covered the leg of the raven with some soaked plaster and kept it one month then it healed the raven and it started to walk and soon it would fly but did not leave us. Do you now think that it is still clumsy???
regards
osman
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