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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
I would appreciate teachers help
Can you help me phrase the sentences correctly? There are just quick corrections please.
There it was, a lifeboat with a man on looking the horizon hoping to see a rescue team come.
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you thought there was someone about to lurk up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a difference than if you press hard?
He has been more aggressive as the time goes on.
He fits in well with/into the coach's and team's system. He's the right player for the team.
I barely have any sensation in my leg, I can't feel it.
Thank you
There it was, a lifeboat with a man on looking the horizon hoping to see a rescue team come.
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you thought there was someone about to lurk up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a difference than if you press hard?
He has been more aggressive as the time goes on.
He fits in well with/into the coach's and team's system. He's the right player for the team.
I barely have any sensation in my leg, I can't feel it.
Thank you
Top answer
There it was, a lifeboat with a man on it looking at the horizon hoping to see rescuers coming. The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran. The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
- There it was, a lifeboat with a man on it looking at the horizon hoping to see rescuers coming.
- The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
- The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
- Would pressing the screen lightly make a bigger difference than if you pressed hard?
- He has been more aggressive as time goes on.
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There it was, a lifeboat with a man on it looking at the horizon hoping to see rescuers coming.
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a bigger difference than if you pressed hard?
He has been more agg
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a bigger difference than if you pressed hard?
He has been more agg
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Hi,
Are these your corrections?
There it was, a lifeboat with a man on it looking at the horizon hoping to see rescuers coming.
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a bigger difference than if you
Are these your corrections?
There it was, a lifeboat with a man on it looking at the horizon hoping to see rescuers coming.
The wind was so strong it pushed me in the back as I ran.
The way the scene was filmed you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
Would pressing the screen lightly make a bigger difference than if you
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AnonymousAre these your corrections?What did you think they were?
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I don't know I thought you had just copied my sentences since I think there are mistakes that I spotted that I hadn't before.
I'm not so sure about this sentence, but I'm pretty sure a comma is needed.
The way the scene was filmed, you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
I'm not convinced t
I'm not so sure about this sentence, but I'm pretty sure a comma is needed.
The way the scene was filmed, you would've thought there was someone about to sneak up on him.
I'm not convinced t
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