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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
I Wore The New Moon...
I wore the new moon on my heart
as you wear a jewel
I shone it with my tears
as you shine gold
I showed it to the world
as you show your beloved
I brought it over the water
as you see your image
I saw the wonder of colors
as you watch the rainbow
as you wear a jewel
I shone it with my tears
as you shine gold
I showed it to the world
as you show your beloved
I brought it over the water
as you see your image
I saw the wonder of colors
as you watch the rainbow
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I always love your poems but I am afraid I don't have a clue of what this one means.
- I always love your poems but I am afraid I don't have a clue of what this one means.
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I always love your poems but I am afraid I don't have a clue of what this one means.
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Hello Anita
This is an interesting one. I think you have to say 'shined' in line 3: for some reason, when 'to shine' means 'to make bright', or 'to polish', the past tense is 'shined' ('he shined his shoes', etc).
I like 'I brought it over the water'; but I'm not sure how 'as you see' fits in. Does the rainbow at the end take us away from the moon, I wonder?
MrP
This is an interesting one. I think you have to say 'shined' in line 3: for some reason, when 'to shine' means 'to make bright', or 'to polish', the past tense is 'shined' ('he shined his shoes', etc).
I like 'I brought it over the water'; but I'm not sure how 'as you see' fits in. Does the rainbow at the end take us away from the moon, I wonder?
MrP
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