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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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I like Psy the most. he became popular the world around 1 year ago because of his Youtube video. but in korea, he has already been popular 10 years ago because of his beatiful melodies and lyris. he has a lot of hit songs in korea even though people all over the world know just one song that is “gunam ???”. among them, because of rain is my favorite, I first heard his music when I was a high school student and have been a fan ever since.
I see why he is a great singer-song writer. I like his musical style and how he writes his lyrics. his songs are cheering up. for example, I listen to music while jogging because that way I can forget about exhaustion and my stress. I hope to go to one of his concerts again so that I can personally feel the magic that he creates whenever he is on stage
I see why he is a great singer-song writer. I like his musical style and how he writes his lyrics. his songs are cheering up. for example, I listen to music while jogging because that way I can forget about exhaustion and my stress. I hope to go to one of his concerts again so that I can personally feel the magic that he creates whenever he is on stage
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Mostly Revised Passage: I like Psy the most. He became popular around the world about a year ago, because of his Youtube video. In Korea, he has already been popular for 10 years, because of his beautiful melodies and lyrics.
- Mostly Revised Passage: I like Psy the most.
- He became popular around the world about a year ago, because of his Youtube video.
- In Korea, he has already been popular for 10 years, because of his beautiful melodies and lyrics.
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- Among them, "Because of Rain" is my favorite.
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Mostly Revised Passage:
I like Psy the most. He became popular around the world about a year ago, because of his Youtube video. In Korea, he has already been popular for 10 years, because of his beautiful melodies and lyrics. He has many hit songs in Korea, even though people all over the world know only one song, “gunam ???”. Among them, "Because of Rain" is my favorite.
I first hear
I like Psy the most. He became popular around the world about a year ago, because of his Youtube video. In Korea, he has already been popular for 10 years, because of his beautiful melodies and lyrics. He has many hit songs in Korea, even though people all over the world know only one song, “gunam ???”. Among them, "Because of Rain" is my favorite.
I first hear
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