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Altarex Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I Wish I Could Make Change In The World
I Wish I Could Make Change In The World
i wish i could make a change in the world but sometimes things are not easy an ... life is just not fair ... the people who have tons of money an make millions spend it on the wrong things ...... we all know what should be truely done but yet no one does anything .... i belive that if someone was given the chance to change the world it could be done ... the person who should be able to uphold the gift that well be given to them one day well be able to change the world from what we know it as today ..... if the goverment wanted to change how things are they could .... they just dont choose too ... due to money ... an poltics but who really cares about those things its about how we spend each waken moment on the planet either its with your friends or family thats were it should be spent in life. It shouldnt be .... about all money an who's gonna be the most popular person its just all the wrong things ..we should start looking at life with a whole new meaning ......
i wish i could make a change in the world but sometimes things are not easy an ... life is just not fair ... the people who have tons of money an make millions spend it on the wrong things ...... we all know what should be truely done but yet no one does anything .... i belive that if someone was given the chance to change the world it could be done ... the person who should be able to uphold the gift that well be given to them one day well be able to change the world from what we know it as today ..... if the goverment wanted to change how things are they could .... they just dont choose too ... due to money ... an poltics but who really cares about those things its about how we spend each waken moment on the planet either its with your friends or family thats were it should be spent in life. It shouldnt be .... about all money an who's gonna be the most popular person its just all the wrong things ..we should start looking at life with a whole new meaning ......
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Hi, I already gave you an answer in a duplicate thread. You need to add capitals and correct punctuation, and to correct your huge number of spelling mistakes. If yo do that and repost, we will offer you further advice.
- Hi, I already gave you an answer in a duplicate thread.
- You need to add capitals and correct punctuation, and to correct your huge number of spelling mistakes.
- If yo do that and repost, we will offer you further advice.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
I already gave you an answer in a duplicate thread.
You need to add capitals and correct punctuation, and to correct your huge number of spelling mistakes.
If yo do that and repost, we will offer you further advice.
Best wishes, Clive
I already gave you an answer in a duplicate thread.
You need to add capitals and correct punctuation, and to correct your huge number of spelling mistakes.
If yo do that and repost, we will offer you further advice.
Best wishes, Clive
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