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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I was wondering if you can edit my essay and give me any tips on what i can do to make it better?

Important key factors to a successful school year

College can be the root of both pleasure and stress but there are several guidelines that can help college students to improve their study habits and time management in order to be successful. Successful college students know how to balance their time; they take multiple courses so it is very important that they learn how to manage their course load. Good ways of doing these are using an agenda book, studying ahead time, keeping focus and having a positive attitude.
An agenda book can help students document their test dates, presentations, or any important deadlines or assignments. Agenda books really help students to pace themselves so they can stay ahead of their class work and not fall behind. Students should always study ahead of time in order to obtain a good grade. For example if a student was given an assignment on Monday and the assignment was due the following week a student thriving for an "A" would immediately setup a flexible studying schedule which would allow them to complete their assignment ahead of time. But if a student fails to complete their work early then they are more likely to find themselves in a harder situation in which they are more likely to receive a failing grade. In addition to being organized students should also learn how to be well focused on their class work.
There are wide verities of things that can distract students from reaching their goal and sadly these things can push them back. So students must learn to distinguish a point in time to be determined; For -eight hour time period opportunity to make-up their grade. The student would have to choose between studying during their free time and partying during their free time.
The option of partying can distract a student from their goal of passing their classes. So it is important for students to do all they can to maintain their focus on their goals and choose between their options wisely. But there are some students that would rather choose to party than to study because they favor pleasure over labor. This kind of mentality can ruin a student's chance of successfully graduating. In other words to exceed in college one must maintain a positive attitude between their work and extramural programs. So one would put the same equal amount of time and focus in both plans whether their plans rotate around school or the club. Take for example a college sophomore with a 4.0 GPA that was always clubbing every Friday or Saturday night. Other students are probably wondering how someone with a party habit could maintain a high G.P.A but the answer to that question is simple. The student typically treated their school work and extracurricular activities with an encouraging outlook. Meaning the student must have studied during a certain time period and used their party time as a reward for their schoolwork or high achievements; they would had also utilize their agenda book to keep up with their work and so forth. In all a success requires a structure of discipline that also comes with a handful of rewards.
  

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Hi, You need to improve the structure of your essay. When I read it, it seems to be mainly a lot of unorganized statements. Have a look here, particlarly at points 6/7/8.

  • Hi, You need to improve the structure of your essay.
  • When I read it, it seems to be mainly a lot of unorganized statements.
  • Have a look here, particlarly at points 6/7/8.
  • Clive
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Hi,


You need to improve the structure of your essay. When I read it, it seems to be mainly a lot of unorganized statements.

Have a look here, particlarly at points 6/7/8.


Clive

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