Hi, You need to improve the structure of your essay. When I read it, it seems to be mainly a lot of unorganized statements. Have a look here, particlarly at points 6/7/8.
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Hi,
You need to improve the structure of your essay. When I read it, it seems to be mainly a lot of unorganized statements.
Have a look here, particlarly at points 6/7/8.
Clive