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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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I was waiting for 15 minutes in front of the store when an old man spoke to

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00Do these sentences have anything odd or awkward?02br
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00A: I was waiting for 15 minutes in front of the store when an old man spoke to me.02br
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00B: While I was waiting for 15 minutes an old man spoke to me.0-
  

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0 I'd suggest the past perfect, those two don't seem quite OK to me: 02br
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01i00I 01b00had been02b00 01b00already02b00 waiting for 15 minutes in front of the store when an old man 01b00spoke02b00 to me.02i00 0-
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01cite10Marius Hancu12cite10I'd suggest the past perfect, those two don't seem quite OK to me: 12br
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11i10I 11b10had been12b10 11b10already12b10 waiting for 15 minutes in front of the store when an old man 11b10spoke12b10 to me.12i
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0 The "for 15 minutes" insert is changing/messing up the usage more than you think, I believe ...02br
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00 But 01b00was 02b00it's there, of course: 02br
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01cite10Marius Hancu12cite10The "for 15 minutes" insert is changing/messing up the usage more than you think, I believe ...12br
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10 But 11b10was 12b10it's there, of course: 12br
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10Hi Marius02br
00What about this? I think '
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01cite10Anonymous12cite10Please answer my questions.12br
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10Do these sentences have anything odd or awkward?12br
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10A: I was waiting for 15 minutes in front of the store when an old man spoke to me.12br
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10B: While I was waiting for 15 minutes an old man spoke to m
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01cite10Marius Hancu12cite10The "for 15 minutes" insert is changing/messing up the usage more than you think, I believe ...12br
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10But 11b10was 12b10it's there, of course: 12br
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10Hi Marius02br
00What about this? I think 'w
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0Hi all. Thank you for your answers.02br
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00I'm a Japanese leaner who teaches in a Japanese school. I thought this matter over, and I now agree with Marius on his comment of "the time leading to that moment", so I think Past Perfect is better, of course "was waiting" is also colloqially OK.0-

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