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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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I was also a traffic jam in the city
It was also a traffic jam in the city, lots of people were in a hurry, so the road got stuck seriously.
There was also a traffic jam in the city: lots of people were in a hurry, so the vehicles were seriously stuck on the road.
Hi,
Is it better to rewrite the first in the above as the second? Thanks.
There was also a traffic jam in the city: lots of people were in a hurry, so the vehicles were seriously stuck on the road.
Hi,
Is it better to rewrite the first in the above as the second? Thanks.
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Yes, the second version is better. Some would use a semi-colon instead of the colon, but I prefer the punctuation you have chosen. It works somewhat like an equals sign (=).
- Yes, the second version is better.
- Some would use a semi-colon instead of the colon, but I prefer the punctuation you have chosen.
- It works somewhat like an equals sign (=).
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Yes, the second version is better. Some would use a semi-colon instead of the colon, but I prefer the punctuation you have chosen. It works somewhat like an equals sign (=).
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