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Kanonathena Posted 15 years ago
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I was able to comply with various safty measures including ...
Hello, I am addressing the selection criterias for a job, one of the sleclection criterias is "the ability to develop and maintain a safe working environment", I wrote:
I have had experience working at the processing line on a fish farm in Dover. I was able to comply with the code of conduct and took required safety measures such as wearing appropriate outfit and operating machinery in a cautious manner.
How to make this sound more formal? I feel "operating machinery in a cautious manner" especially need change among other things.
Thank you.
I have had experience working at the processing line on a fish farm in Dover. I was able to comply with the code of conduct and took required safety measures such as wearing appropriate outfit and operating machinery in a cautious manner.
How to make this sound more formal? I feel "operating machinery in a cautious manner" especially need change among other things.
Thank you.
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The main problem is that your experience does not quite come up to the criterion of 'developing and maintaining', which is a supervisory responsibility. Therefore, you should be brief: While working on the processing line of a Dover fish farm , I conscientiously complied with all safety measures, such as wearing required gear and operating all equipment according to recommended guidelines .
- The main problem is that your experience does not quite come up to the criterion of 'developing and maintaining', which is a supervisory responsibility.
- Therefore, you should be brief: While working on the processing line of a Dover fish farm , I conscientiously complied with all safety measures, such as wearing required gear and operating all equipment according to recommended guidelines .
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The main problem is that your experience does not quite come up to the criterion of 'developing and maintaining', which is a supervisory responsibility. Therefore, you should be brief:
While working on the processing line of a Dover fish farm, I conscientiously complied with all safety measures, such as wearing required gear
While working on the processing line of a Dover fish farm, I conscientiously complied with all safety measures, such as wearing required gear
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