I want to write a summary presentation summary. Is it correct? Please review it?

AnonymousMy presentation summaryIntroductionEducational BackgroundWork ExperiencesDaily WorksMajor success improvements in my career.Clarify improvements (One or more, as much as time allows)

That is a good basic outline, Anonymous. Instead of the last item, I suggest that you substitute 'Future goals'.

Thanks. About my last sentence I want to describe one or more improvements in my career. I want to present 3 improvements or projects. If time allows me, I will try to explain 1 more.

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emrahaltindisAbout my last sentence I want to describe one or more improvements in my career. I want to present 3 improvements or projects. If time allows me, I will try to explain 1 more.

I understand that, but I have suggested that you do something else instead: talk abo

Hello Mister Micawber,

Thanks for you advice, I didn't understant you. You wrote me to talk abour my future career goals instead of explanation of success.
Ok I add your advise, thanks for your help.

emrahaltindisYou wrote me to talk abour my future career goals instead of explanation of success.

Yes, instead of the details in your 6th step.