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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

i want to send mail to hr requesting for my joining date..pls correct my letter

Hi,
Im <name> and I have completed my M.C.A in <College name>.
I attended interview on sep 22 and i got selected.
I received call letter and offer letter also.
Kindly let me know the date of joining.
Looking forward to here from you.

Regards,'
<name>
  

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Hi, You mean that the offer letter did not specify when you should start work? That seems very strange to me. Did you already tell them that you accept their offer?

— Clive

  • Hi, You mean that the offer letter did not specify when you should start work?
  • That seems very strange to me.
  • Did you already tell them that you accept their offer?
  • Clive
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Hi,

You mean that the offer letter did not specify when you should start work?
That seems very strange to me.

Did you already tell them that you accept their offer?

Clive
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Respected Sir,

With due respect I inform you that I am NAME from COLLEGE NAME. I have attended COMPANY NAME hiring on Sep 22, 2012 and got selected. Sir, Please kindly let me know my joining date and place. I will be very grateful to you.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
NAME
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You have written this in what seems to be appropriate Indian English. I only have a few edits to offer you.

Respected Sir,

With due respect I inform you that I am NAME from COLLEGE NAME. I attended COMPANY NAME hiring on Sep 22, 2012 and was selected. Sir, please kindly let me know my joining date and place. I will be very
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