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Alex534 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

I want to send a training report to Managing Director Help!

Hi,

I want to send a email to our Managing Director about training report. I havent sound knowlege in grammar. Please help. I tried below please correct errors if any,

Dear Mr____,

I thank you for giving me an opportunity to join with you.



Pre-process training is very helpful to improve our communication and listening skills.

On the day 1, we introduced with and adjectives of the first letter of our name. This made interesting and we get acquainted each other. We played some games to improve our vocabulary skills. Our trainer gave us a topic and tested our ability. He assessed and gave us the feed back.



On the day 2, we have learned the email etiquette. We have also learned the 50 states, people and culture of the . We have learned Articles, Nouns, Adjectives and Adverbs.



We have revisited the grammar and improved ourselves. Apart from that, we have learned



1. How to visualize our thoughts?



2. How to think logically?



3. How to listen and obey orders? And



4. How to behave in the corporate world?



Though, I have eight months of experienced in email support. I am learning a lot.



I thank again for this golden opportunity and I assure that I will perform well in the process training.



Yours sincerely,



Mark Alexander.





  

Top answer

Hi - I'm not sure what situation your training report refers to - is it giving your new employer some feedback on your induction training? Some parts are rather difficult to understand. Anyway, I've tidied it up for you.

  • Hi - I'm not sure what situation your training report refers to - is it giving your new employer some feedback on your induction training?
  • Some parts are rather difficult to understand.
  • Anyway, I've tidied it up for you.
  • Dear Mr.
  • Thank you for giving me an opportunity to join your company.
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Hi - I'm not sure what situation your training report refers to - is it giving your new employer some feedback on your induction training? Some parts are rather difficult to understand. Anyway, I've tidied it up for you.

Dear Mr.

Thank you for giving me an opportunity to join your company.

The Pre-process training was very helpful and improved my communication and liste

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