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Guava 534 Posted 7 years ago
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I want to make follow up email

Can any one make this better? i want to make follow up email.

Dear Sir,

Regarding 75 fire extinguishers requested back in March for Kitchen, would you kindly give me an update? When we should expect to receive?

  

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Dear sir, Regarding the 75 fire extinguishers we requested in March for [the / our] kitchen: would you kindly give me an update? When should we expect to receive them?

— David Hatton

  • Dear sir, Regarding the 75 fire extinguishers we requested in March for [the / our] kitchen: would you kindly give me an update?
  • When should we expect to receive them?
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Dear sir,

Regarding the 75 fire extinguishers we requested in March for [the / our] kitchen: would you kindly give me an update? When should we expect to receive them?

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