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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

I want to know grammar problems in my sentences. Please help me? :)

Steve Jobs known as an inventor and ex-CEO of Apple first invented an ipod that had lots of functions like a calling system and a music device. It was really a sensational goods, so he earned a lot of money. After that, his successive invention made people realize inportant of a creative thinking. In other words, being different from others makes us successful.

I am not a native speaker but I want to improve English skill so please don't hegitage to point out my problems!! Thank you so much for your time and help in advance!
  
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