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Rackspace Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

I want to improve composition and structure of this sentenceo

  1. "mark is intelligent and charming, two rare qualities to be found in one person."
  2. "mark is both intelligent and charming, it is rare to find both these qualities in a single person"
Which one of the above sentences is better, and can you check and correct it please?
  
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