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Sb70012 Posted 12 years ago
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I want to create you ....

Hello, would you please be kind enough to proofread this blue self-made statement to me?

My context: I have a friend. She is not good at internet. She has asked me to make her a Facebook account. Now I want to say to her this blue sentence. Is it ok or natural?

I want to create you a new Facebook account. So, if you receive a code via SMS into your phone, then please send me the code.

Thank you
  

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It reads a little bit as if you are initiating the process rather than responding to your friend's request. I would guess that the message ought to arrive, so I think the second sentence could reflect that more clearly. Hi, I'm setting up the Facebook account that you wanted.

— GPY

  • It reads a little bit as if you are initiating the process rather than responding to your friend's request.
  • I would guess that the message ought to arrive, so I think the second sentence could reflect that more clearly.
  • Hi, I'm setting up the Facebook account that you wanted.
  • You should receive a text message on your phone containing a security code.
  • When you do, please pass it on to me.
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It reads a little bit as if you are initiating the process rather than responding to your friend's request. I would guess that the message ought to arrive, so I think the second sentence could reflect that more clearly.

Hi, I'm setting up the Facebook account that you wanted. You should receive a text message on your phone containing a security code. When you do, please pass it on to m
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