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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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I want to create a simpler sentence.

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00 I would like to make the following sentence a simpler one.02br
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00 '24 hour water intake was measured02br
00 on day 1 of gestation, on day 7 of gestation, on day 8 of gestation, on day 9 of gestation and on day 10 of gestation.'02br
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00 The first idea is as follows.02br
02br
00 '24 hour water intake was measured on day 1 and from 7 to 10 of gestation.'02br
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00 The second one is like this.02br
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00 '24 hour water intake was measured on day 1 and every day from day 7 to 10 of gestation.'02br
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00 I suspect these sentences are not very good.02br
00 Any advice and opinions will be appreciated.0-
  

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02br 02br 0024-hour water intake was measured on days 1, 7, 8, 9, and 10 of gestation. 0-

— M. Caliban

  • 02br 02br 0024-hour water intake was measured on days 1, 7, 8, 9, and 10 of gestation.
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0024-hour water intake was measured on day 1 of gestation as well as on days 7 through 10.02br
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0024-hour water intake was measured on days 1, 7, 8, 9, and 10 of gestation. 0-
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0 I'm the one who started this thread.02br
00 Thank you for your advice.02br
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