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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

I wanna write some thing right .

plz check that ( and we also thank you because you made us participate in this carnaval
  

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com#error Anonymous plz check that ( and we also thank you because you made us participate in this carnaval If you desire to write correctly, you need to start writing words in full English form, no "plz"," dunno" or "u" etc. Also - means something additional. Not sure why you used it.

  • com#error Anonymous plz check that ( and we also thank you because you made us participate in this carnaval If you desire to write correctly, you need to start writing words in full English form, no "plz"," dunno" or "u" etc.
  • Also - means something additional.
  • Not sure why you used it.
  • From this context, that what is implied.
  • I am guessing you meant this: We'd like to thank you for allowing us to participate in the carnival.
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Anonymousplz check that ( and we also thank you because you made us participate in this carnaval
If you desire to write correctly, you need to start writing words in full English form, no "plz","
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"Thank you for xxxxxxxx ................and we also thank you because you made us participate in this carnival"

The use of the word "made" suggest that you were forced to participate in the carnival. As you are thanking this person I think that was not the case.

Some suggestions :-

....because you helped us to participate
....you invited us to

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