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Target Group: Since this is a game which focuses on teamwork so our target group is liable to be for people who come in a group. This game is applicable to people who are 10 and above as it may require some knowledge as well as critical thinking skill to accomplish numerous stages in the game so it may inapt for people who are younger than the stated age. As this game room is to be situated in front of the university so our main target is probably KMUTT students. This could be a new sensation for students to gather with their friends and foster their bonds as they work together to conquer the different stages of the game. Not only does it help to improve the harmony between friends, but it also teaches the students how to work as a team. Moreover, this may be a stepping stone for students to hone their teamwork skills and apply to their future group works or activities. For those who is an ardent fan of games and enjoys learning through games then this is definitely for you!