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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago

I Turned Into A Rose!

0 All the petals fell to the ground 02br
00But I saw a sight so divine, 02br
00The colours were fading slowly 02br
00And the flower stood up intact. 02br
00I touched it with the tip 02br
00Of my fingers trembling 02br
00Lest it be hurt. 02br
00The softness was soothing to my being 02br
00And the colours filled me with brightness. 02br
00Each petal spoke to me for a while 02br
00About the secrets of my existence. 02br
00And as I breathed into the petals 02br
00Voila! I turned into a rose. 0-
  

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0 Hi Anita, 02br 02br 00That was beautiful and sensitive. 02br 02br 00How about a word or two about my posts "forgiving the past" and "passage of time" 02br 02br 00thanks 02br 00Shankar 0-

— K.Shankar

  • 0 Hi Anita, 02br 02br 00That was beautiful and sensitive.
  • 02br 02br 00How about a word or two about my posts "forgiving the past" and "passage of time" 02br 02br 00thanks 02br 00Shankar 0-
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0 Hi Anita, 02br
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00How about a word or two about my posts "forgiving the past" and "passage of time" 02br
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00thanks 02br
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0 That's a very interesting one, anita! The last line is a surprise. Quite a different rhythm and phrasing. Do you have any more like that? 02br
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00MrP 0-
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0 Thanks Shankar. I'll surely look up those poems. 0-
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0 Thanks a lot Mr.P. I'm glad that u noticed it and liked it. Maybe, i have been reading a lot of poems on personifications, and so got this poem. This is as it came to me... on the spur of the moment and i liked it. 0-
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