I try writing an email to my friend. I don't know if it is wrong. Can you help me?

Hi Jane, How are thing? I have just read your email and I feel glad when knowing that you care about my friend, An.

An is one of my best friends. She is also my neighbours. We have grown up together. If you ask about her personality I think she's a humorous and industrious girl. Her hobbies is reading book and gardening. She also works hard and cooks very well. She can help you do housework. Your children may love her because she has lots of experience of looking after children, she has three younger sisters.

Despite her poverty, she is the most excellent student in my senior high school. She works hard, earns good grades. She has just got a full academy schoolarship to a university in London. We were really proud of her. Next week, she is going to move to the London but she doesn't have any relatives here. It is very kind of you to let her stay with your family until she can find an anpartment. I think she will fit in with your family.

That 's almost all about An. If you want more information, you can ask me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Love,