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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

I tried to say it in English but I'm not sure that it's right. Could you please correct me

This morning, under the cover of sleep
I wandered in the palace of memories...
This is a gossamer
And the tear is on it
Hardened like a drop of amber.
And the fragments of dreams of one’s early days
First wrongs, downs, chagrins.
Here is the pedestal of confessions
Covered in dust...
Tangled threads of relationship.
Look!
Yellowed leaves of words
And the necklace of delicate dreams.
And photos of friends ...
  

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This morning, under the cover of sleep, I wandered in the palace of memories. This is a gossamer, And a tear is on it, Hardened like a drop of amber, And the fragments of dreams of my early days — First wrongs, downs, chagrins. Here is the pedestal of confessions Covered in dust: Tangled threads of relationships.

— Mister Micawber

  • This morning, under the cover of sleep, I wandered in the palace of memories.
  • This is a gossamer, And a tear is on it, Hardened like a drop of amber, And the fragments of dreams of my early days — First wrongs, downs, chagrins.
  • Here is the pedestal of confessions Covered in dust: Tangled threads of relationships.
  • Look!
  • Yellowed leaves of words And a necklace of delicate dreams.
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This morning, under the cover of sleep,
I wandered in the palace of memories.
This is a gossamer,
And a tear is on it,
Hardened like a drop of amber,
And the fragments of dreams of my early days—
First wrongs, downs, chagrins.
Here is the pedestal of confessions
Covered in dust:
Tangled threads of relationships.
Look!
Yellowed
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