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Well, I agree it's interesting, but it's not immediately relevant to your proposal, Sandra, so at this stage, I suggest you focus on other considerations. I think an indication of what the students on the trip could actually do when they get there should be far more central, so that certainly needs to be included and to be expanded upon. And i'd like to see something about the local wildlife, and vegetation too, not that I imagine there's much to see. Presumably the tourist invasion hasn't helped.

the underlined sentences are which I couldn't understand, and I'm not sure it's because of grammar or something else.

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Sandra:

I assume that you wrote a proposal and your teacher wants you to change it.

Silencio Tarsierso that certainly needs to be included

What does that refer to in the sentence?

It refers back to the word "indication" and the following clause: what the students on the trip could actually do when they get there

Your teacher wants you to include the activities that the students will do at the destination.

And he wants you to include a lot of details about the activities. (to be included and to be expanded upon)

Silencio Tarsier And i'd like to see something about the local wildlife, and vegetation too, not that I imagine there's much to see.

He wants you to write about the animals and plants that live in the area where the students are going.

Silencio TarsierPresumably the tourist invasion hasn't helped.

He remarks that there are a lot of tourists that go to this place. This has hurt the animals and plants that live there.

I think it's a grammar question

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