I think I put some wrong words in this passage, can anyone correct those?

I didn't leave any single place in my heart to fall in love with all the beautiful women that I know (or knew?) but my heart couldn't hold the pressure of love and burst into many peaces, so I joined all the pieces with super glue and saw it became so hazy. so I painted it red with some glitters and took it to those beautiful women hoping at least one woman would take it but unfortunately they were color blind. So I created an amazing lance that could help them to see my shining red color beautiful heart, but then I suddenly fell down from my bed and realized that it was my dream.