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Lee Jones Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
I think i got this right now can some one check
short story
"The rain is coming down all around the town, the clouds are getting thicker."
A man enters the street, with long dark hair down his back with glowing blue eyes, and rain is running down his face.
"A voice is travelling down thru the rain down the street, come over here babe
Dave,sed"
"The rain is coming down all around the town, the clouds are getting thicker."
A man enters the street, with long dark hair down his back with glowing blue eyes, and rain is running down his face.
"A voice is travelling down thru the rain down the street, come over here babe
Dave,sed"
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Hello, Lee-- and welcome to English Forums. What is it exactly that you are trying to do with this, and how can we help?
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Hello, Lee-- and welcome to English Forums. What is it exactly that you are trying to do with this, and how can we help?
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hello im just trying to get my punctuation right.its placing commas i strugle with.thanks
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Well, you have worse problems than commas. Would you like to try again? Start by placing your text neatly in paragraph form.
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