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Ratnakar Dutt Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

I spoke to him. He mentioned that he is interested in violin.

How to avoid "He" twice in the below sentence. can we improve it better?

I spoke to him. He mentioned that he is interested in violin.

  

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There is no need to avoid using "he" twice. It reads perfectly fine. But you could write "He mentioned an interest in violin." I prefer "the violin" in this context, but it is not wrong without "the".

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