I spoke before I wrote!

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0 It's always easier to say something that is complicated than it is to  write it. I spoke the following, and now I would like to include it in  an essay of mine. Any critiques or modifications that do not change it  too much will be appreciated.02br02br01b00"Notwithstanding the inaccuracies and speculation, the film itself  is still a piece of entertainment. As such, it provides us with a  marginal amount of pleasure as we watch exonerated from the inhibitions  of guilt or reality. We can enjoy the ghosts, the scares, and all of  the things that bump in the night."02br02br02b00Thanks!0-

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0 01b00"Notwithstanding the inaccuracies and speculation, the film itself is still a piece of entertainment. As such, it provides us with a marginal amount of pleasure as we watch exonerated from the inhibitions of guilt or reality. We can enjoy the ghosts, the scares, and all of the things that bump in the night."02b02br
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01i00 02i00I would make only a couple of small changes - a comma after "watch," "frights" instead of "scares," and "things that 01b00go 02b00bump in the night." 0-

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