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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I saw a dream last night

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Last night, I saw a dream. I saw that I was wearing a beautiful white dress and was standing outside a building. The building was made on the bank of a lake like a harbour. The part of the lake close to the building was frozen, and there was a man laying inside that frozen water as a dead man in a coffin. I stretch my hand towards him to take him out. A big fish, out of nowhere, came and hit the frozen part with its head so hard that it, along with the man, broke into pieces. With this I woke up. I think that was a horrible dream.

  

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sundarnaz Last night, I saw (I would "had") a dream. I saw that I was wearing a beautiful white dress and was standing outside a building. The building was on the bank of a lake , like a harbour.

  • sundarnaz Last night, I saw (I would "had") a dream.
  • I saw that I was wearing a beautiful white dress and was standing outside a building.
  • The building was on the bank of a lake , like a harbour.
  • The part of the lake close to the building was frozen, and there was a man ly ing inside that frozen water; he looked like a dead man in a coffin.
  • I stretch ed my hand towards him to take him out.
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sundarnazLast night, I saw (I would "had") a dream. I saw that I was wearing a beautiful white dress and was standing outside a building. The building was on the bank of a lake, like a harbour. The part of the lake close to the building was frozen, and there was a m

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