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The arts, including art, music, and theatre are considered to be important in society.

? Do you think the arts still have a place in our modern lifestyles?

? Should the arts be included in school programs?

my essay:

The roles of the arts are constantly being questioned. Some people question whether the arts are necessary or justified, most often when it comes to today's lifestyle. For others, there is no debating the belief that the arts have never been more important to our society, and should be fully integrated into our lives, our community, and education in general.

To my way of thinking, nowadays art has fallen into a state of neglect. More often than not technology and science are at the center of attention. Literature seems to be outdated and theatres are of no use when we all have TVs in our houses. Nevertheless, art enthusiasts still manage to find time in their fast_spaced lives. In fact, thanks to the advancements in technology they can communicate information ,and art can shape their everyday lives more than ever.

It has been proved in various ways that our educational system is quite a defective one. Lack of sufficient hours dedicated to art and its sub_categories is undisputedly one of them. Although art may not be on the priority list of education, however, an artist can be as efficient as a doctor if schooling is well_represented. to my way of thinking increasing the role of art in school programs is a necessity.

there is this popular saying that goes like this: “Earth” without “art” is just “Eh,” a desolate and meaningless place. At the end, art in any form brings color to our lives and makes them more manageable. whether in the age of modernity or ancient, children or adults we all should welcome it in our daily lives.