I really wonder... is this sentence correct??

Hi,

Gwanju is famous for its pottery and has many historic sites. It is also a good place to live because the air is clean and agreeable.

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Kwang-ju is famous for its pottery and has many ruins. Moreover, it is a good place to live because its air is fresh and nice.

Best wishes, Clive

Hi, clive.. Nice to see you again..

How have you been?

... then what is the answer for that question.. T.T

Hi again,

After my edits, both are correct.

Clive

then You mean "be famous of" is also right?

I really didn't know that expression... T.T

Hi,

No. I said 'after my edits'.

Your original versions are both wrong. My versions with my edits in pink are both right.

Clive

c.. .thanks..

I didn't check your edit..^^

in fact, second sentence is made by me.. but.. I didn't make it correct till now.. ^^

Thanks for your consult.. ^_^

CU~

Hi clive uncle,

This is sreeja studing in 3rd class, 8yrs old, could you please give me a sentence for the word wonder.

Thanks

Sreeja.

Hi,

I wonder what time it is.

Best wishes, Clive