I really need your help. Thank you for paying the attention my motivation letter

Dear Sir or Madam

I am Nguyen Tien Trinh, I was born in Hanoi, Vietnam. During my education to date, my strength of character and determination to fulfil my goals enabled me to work hard and achieve good grades.
Now I fulfil myseft ready to reach out for a higher educational goal and I am applying to you to study for Master of Business Administration Program in Financial Management.

I have graduated the Bacherlor of Arts in New Zealand, including studies Microeconomics, Marcro Foundations of Economic Analysis, Firms and Markets, Principles and Politics of Public Management, etc. Besides these economics and political papers, I incorporated other social science papers like history of physics, scientific research method, social investigating method, etc ( I graduated the bachelor of arts, majoring in philosophy in Vietnam). I studied this variety of subjects because I am interested in both philosophy and economics and wish to achieve a balance in my education. The combined studies have equipped with the effective analytical skills and the ability to draw logical and rational conclusions.

Since I was a child, I was fascinated by the business man and being a freshman in Vietnamese univeristy , I owned to manage my café club. When I studied in New Zealand i used to be attrached by the financial stock market and I enjoy reading the financial maganizes. On viewing the Webside of Coburg University I was mesmerivied by Master of Business Administration Program in Financial Management. From my reading, this program is the systematic education I always wish.

I am motivated to apply to Coburg University not simply because of the course offered, but by the reputation of the University and the lively Fachhochschule Coburg in which it lies. The traditional of the university is to offer the practice based study programme and Master of Business Administration Program in Financial Management is the unique program in Germany.

My wish is Master of Business Administration Program in Financial Management as I want to be a Successfully Financial Manager in the future to run my business in Vietnam. So I wish to be accepted for Master of Business Administration Program in Financail Management of Coburg University.
If you do want to have more information about me, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I am looking forwards to hearing from you much.

Thank you in advance
Best regards,
Nguyen Tien Trinh