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Trần Bảo Khuyên Posted 6 years ago
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There has been an ever-increasing number of cancer cases in the globe. In Vietnam, late diagnosis of cancer generally decreases the effectiveness of treatment, rises medical costs, increases the cancer mortality and means a burden on family and society as a whole. According to GLOBOCAN 2018, an estimated 18.1 million new cancer cases and 9.6 million cancer related deaths occurred in 2018, compared with 14.1 million and 8.2 million, respectively in 2012. It provides estimates about the predictive increase in new cancer cases to 29.5 million per year by 2040, due to growth and ageing of the global population. Every year, Vietnam has about 165,000 new cases and over 115,000 deaths from cancer. Cancer control approaches only focus on methods to enhance the diagnosis and treatment of cancer; improve cancer patients’ quality of life. Cancer prevention programs are still underestimated due to diverse cancer risks and mounting challenges in living conditions. Researching on patterns and epidemiology characteristics of cancer patients plays a crucial role in adopting key solutions to prevent cancer in the context of Vietnam.

  1. Materials and Methods

- Subjects: All the newly diagnosed and treated cancer cases in Hue University Hospital from January 01st 2008 to December 30th 2018.

+ Inclusion criteria:

  • All cancer cases diagnosed by histopathology or other methods according to WHO diagnostic criteria.
  • All cancer cases were classified according to the list of The International Classification of Diseases (ICD-10).

+ Exclusion criteria:

  • Patients with suspicious and not interpreted diagnosis.

- Research design: A cross-sectional study.

- Time and setting

+Time: From May 15th 2019 to August 20th 2019.

+ Setting: Hue University Hospital (41-51 Nguyen Hue Street, Hue City, Vietnam).

- Sample size: Total 2008 cancer cases.

- Research techniques: The data from the medical records were checked, selected those included in the inclusion criteria. Fill out the required information directly from medical records to information sheets.

- The information collected includes:

+ Full name.

+ Medical Record number.

+ Telephone numbers.

+ Age groups: <30, 30-39, 40-49, 50-59, 60-69, 70-79, =80.

+ Gender: Male, Female.

+ Residential address.

+ Geographic region: Rural areas, Mountainous areas, Coastal areas, Urban areas.

+ Occupation: Farmer/Worker, Student, White-collar, Business, Housewife, Retired/Aged, Others.

+ Medical history.

+ Date of cancer diagnosis.

+ Type of cancer diagnosed.

+ Stage presentation of cancer: T, N, M; Stage = II, Stage =III.

+ The first treatment modality: Surgery, Radiotherapy, Chemotherapy, Surgery plus Radiotherapy, Surgery plus Chemotherapy, Chemotherapy plus Radiotherapy, Symptomatic, Others.

+ Comorbidity

Statistical analysis: The data was coded, stored and analyzed using SPSS version 20.0. Descriptive factors have been summarized by frequency and proportions, and summary statistics such as mean, standard deviation.

Restriction of research:

-The study gathered data from the medical records from 2008 to 2018 so some of records have been damaged, missed and lost.

-Longitudinal study (10 years), some standardized pathohistology has changed in recent years.

Information mismanagement:

-The questionaire was suitable, clear and consistent for all research subjects, based on the data base of a most fully patient’s record.

-Proceed to collect the test on some records to check the questionnaire before proceeding to collect on the form.

-Metrics are tested, filtered and coded in advance.

Ethical consideration:

- Our research participants were given permission by Medical Record Department to consult their medical records.

- We were completely honest with figures and results of study.

- Patients‘ health information are kept safe and private.

RECOMMENDATIONS:

-To heigten public awareness of prevention and detection of cancer at the early, especially cancers are often detected in late stages: liver cancer and lung cancer.

-Media education for health education in the prevention of viral hepatitis; Screening for early detection of general cancer and breast cancer, cervical cancer in particular needs to expand with a larger scale

  

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I will give you some non-expert (non-medical) advice on the first paragraph. There has been an ever-increasing number of cancer cases in the globe. I The incidence of cancer has been increasing on a global scale.

  • I will give you some non-expert (non-medical) advice on the first paragraph.
  • There has been an ever-increasing number of cancer cases in the globe.
  • I The incidence of cancer has been increasing on a global scale.
  • In Vietnam, the late diagnosis of cancer generally decreases the effectiveness of treatment, raises rises medical costs, increases the cancer mortality rates and imposes means a burden on family and society as a whole.
  • According to GLOBOCAN 2018, (Is this data for Vietnam?
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