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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I really need someone to correct my college essay. i think i have all themain points but its not well organized!! the essay question is what are my career goal and how is college going to help me fullfil them. HELP!
Growing up in a developing country like Egypt I’ve watched many countries and big corporations come to invest in our land and bring new ideas and projects with them. After some time I come to realize that no matter whether you are in Europe or whether you are a doctor, scientist, or even an artist Business is everywhere to be found. Throughout the generations Business has found a way to take control over our lives. Life has become all about Business.
Now as a senior student I have to make a huge decision about how I want to spend the rest of my life. I couldn’t think of a better way than to study different economies and environments, analyze global projects and develop new ideas and strategies. Taking International Business as my major will help me understand why my land is an attraction to investments and most importantly make me develop my home business as well as attracting even more International Businesses to the developing countries.
Throughout my college search I come to realize that to study International Business it is always better to study abroad. New York is ranked the most attractive city for business and innovation and I believe that would be a great help throughout my study. New York Institute of Technology will give me an insight on the world’s greatest power (USA) system as I already have an insight on the Egyptian as well as the German system. I’m convinced that having the opportunity to study in an American environment while using my background information will have a great impact on my future and give me exceptional working skills. NYIT is not only special for its phenomenal location but also for its high education standards. At NYIT I also get the chance to pursuit my favorite sport – Basketball- and compete in a very high level with a great team and coaching staff while earning an exceptional college degree.
Studying at New York Institute of Technology will help me develop myself in so many different ways. I’ll get the chance to improve educationally as well as athletically.
Now as a senior student I have to make a huge decision about how I want to spend the rest of my life. I couldn’t think of a better way than to study different economies and environments, analyze global projects and develop new ideas and strategies. Taking International Business as my major will help me understand why my land is an attraction to investments and most importantly make me develop my home business as well as attracting even more International Businesses to the developing countries.
Throughout my college search I come to realize that to study International Business it is always better to study abroad. New York is ranked the most attractive city for business and innovation and I believe that would be a great help throughout my study. New York Institute of Technology will give me an insight on the world’s greatest power (USA) system as I already have an insight on the Egyptian as well as the German system. I’m convinced that having the opportunity to study in an American environment while using my background information will have a great impact on my future and give me exceptional working skills. NYIT is not only special for its phenomenal location but also for its high education standards. At NYIT I also get the chance to pursuit my favorite sport – Basketball- and compete in a very high level with a great team and coaching staff while earning an exceptional college degree.
Studying at New York Institute of Technology will help me develop myself in so many different ways. I’ll get the chance to improve educationally as well as athletically.
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