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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

I read this, do you understand

Kerr quickly made clear that his adamancy is not rooted in some 1972 Miami Dolphins-style pop-the-champagne bravado that annually celebrates the continuance of a legacy upon the present failures of others.

Is this sentence clear?
Is 'adamancy' a word?
Would you replace upon with 'because of'?

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Top answer

Not really. I'm as big a fan of the NFL as you may find here, but I have no idea what you mean. What is Kerr adamant about?

— BarbaraPA

  • Not really.
  • I'm as big a fan of the NFL as you may find here, but I have no idea what you mean.
  • What is Kerr adamant about?
  • That might help me understand.
  • Technically, you would need hyphens between 1972-Miami-Dolphins-style, which is hideous.
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Not really.

I'm as big a fan of the NFL as you may find here, but I have no idea what you mean.

What is Kerr adamant about? That might help me understand.

Technically, you would need hyphens between 1972-Miami-Dolphins-style, which is hideous. You could try quotes instead: in some "1972 Miami Dolphins style, pop the champagne" bravado. Also not great.

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