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the two pie charts provide data on the rates of several taxes and spending the money with difference purpose in the UK last year.

It is clear that the income tax was the highest of all the UK tax revenue. The money government spent on the pensions received

One of the three tax revenue occupying a high proportion was Income tax, which made up 28%.National insurance tax, which made up 21% . Value added tax ,which made up 17%. The sources that the UK government not depend much was council tax, business rates, fuel duty , all of them made up 5%. The rest sources is corporation tax (8%) and other sources (11%) the biggest proportion in the entire of use.

UK government spending most of their money in four different taxation such as pension which rated for the highest proportion (20%),health care (18%) had a higher percentage than welfare for 1%,and education which occupied 14%.UK government also spent their money for the same way(7%) in defense and undefined spending, They spent the least money of money both general government and transport ,which just occupied 3%.The remaining of money for interest payment on debt (6%) and protection (law, police,,fire,etc)(5%) respectively.