I post my Cover letter, could you check it?

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00I'm looking for a job, and I would like to write a good cover letter. Here, I post my first try 05002br
00This letter is for a concretely job offer, but I would like as well, I can use it for next jobs, and I will only need to change the names (of course) and the qualitites and skills that the company ask for.02br
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00Could you do a quick ckeck?02br
00Thanks!02br
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00[my address on the right]02br
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00[company name and address]02br
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00<< date >>02br
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00 Dear Recruiting Coordinator,02br
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00<< Reference number for the job and/or Job title >>02br
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00I am contacting you in response to your recent advertisement in RECRUITMENT WEB for a JOB TITLE. I am Spanish, and I have decided to continuous my career in UK. Second week of February I will move to Leeds, where a friend of mine is working and living.02br
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00I studied a Computer Engineering Technical Degree and Computer Science Master Degree at University XXX. I spent 7 month at University XXX (UK) doing my Master Degree’s dissertation. In the Master Degree we studied widely how the information technology impacts on the business, and I realised that the join between business and new technology is what really passionate me. I decided to study more about the business structure, and its world. So, last September I started the Business degree by an Internet university, at University XXX.02br
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00My interest in this application is that working as an IT consultant would combine my skills and interest in business, problem-solving/creativity, new technology implications, and working with people. I possess qualities that you ask for in your advertisement, as a technical role, knowledge of new technologies, Java, web services, and a fluently spanish. As well I have skills you seek, operating systems, Linux, communications standards, security and databases. And I can learn new skills quickly. Given my teacher background my communication skill is good, and people understand me quickly. I am motivated by business and want to be part of a successful international organisation.02br
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00Hoping that you find my resume of interest, I look forward to the possibility of discussing my experience and qualifications with you. I will contact you when I arrive at Leeds on 1001sup^{00th02sup}00 of February.02br
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00Don’t hesitate to contact me before I come to Leeds; by mail or phone, my spanish number is 0034 XXX.02br
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00Thank you very much for considering my application.02br
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00Yours faithfully, (if I don’t know the person name)02br
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