I need your kind help to correct my letter plz

0Dear friend I need your kind help to correct my letter plz help, I am desperate what should I do …..;;;02br
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00I would like to write letter to Dean of the faculty due to this letter as below:02br
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00Dear applicant,02br
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00Yes, I did receive the document that you provided me from the KULeuven. I plan to discuss this with my colleagues within the departmental council (Bureau dept. Biologie, Jan. 2006). I will let you know the outcome in January 2006, but I do note that we would like to have proof of your M.Sc. degree before acceptance to the Ph.D. programme.02br
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00Yours 00sincerely00,02br
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00Dear Prof....02br
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00According to my request to apply for a PhD position in your department I would like to know outcome of your committee decision in January 200600 00about my application. I hope as you already know about my situation and my challenging to start my study and I would like to reiterate my strong interest in the position and in working with your staff in department of biology. The knowledge, skills and experiences that I benefit from your department will contribute not only to my future carrier but also to the development of my country. 02br
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00I would like to have the opportunity to enrol in the PhD Programme in department of biology to put my knowledge into a higher standard. Your top-level programme will provide me plenty of knowledge in the field of background. 02br
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00Personally, I am a perseverant person, someone who is motivated and ambitious. Who wants to change her future I am not the student want to study for a fun or for 00 00scholarship because I want to use this opportunity that I am in Belgium to study where they are so many things to learn and 00 00I need all your ( 00I mean all committee member00) kind help to advise me and guide me. 00 00 02br
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00I am also confident that I'm qualified and eager, and prepared to meet all of its challenges I will be available to meet with you for an interview at your convenience. I would be most grateful if you could give my application your most favorable consideration and look forward to hearing from you soon.02br
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00Yours 00sincerely00,02br
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