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Hojita Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

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Hi,

I want to send the following by e-mail to an university professor. Do you think it's written properly? Thank you for stopping by and reading me;) here it goes...

Hello Dr. Torrence,

My name is Hojita, I'm a CSU student and I got an email from university letting me know that you may be willing to admit students without the full complement of prerequisites in your BUS 80/ Mktg Mgmt. I'm very interested in joining your class on Wednesday section 4. I already passed Bus10, Bus20 and Bus90 hopefully you can add me in your class anyways I'll show up on your Wed class.

Regards,

Hojita
  

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Dear Dr. Torrence, My name is Hojita [surname]. I am a CSU student , and I received an email from the university advising me that you may be willing to admit students into your BUS 80/Mktg Mgmt course without the full complement of prerequisites.

  • Dear Dr.
  • Torrence, My name is Hojita [surname].
  • I am a CSU student , and I received an email from the university advising me that you may be willing to admit students into your BUS 80/Mktg Mgmt course without the full complement of prerequisites.
  • I am very interested in joining your Section 4 class on Wednesdays.
  • I have already passed Bus 10, Bus 20 and Bus 90 , and I hope that you will consider adding me to your class roll.
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Dear Dr. Torrence,

My name is Hojita [surname]. I am a CSU student, and I received an email from the university advising me that you may be willing to admit students into your BUS 80/Mktg Mgmt course without the full complement of prerequisites.

I am very interested in joining your Section 4 class on Wednesdays.

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