I need your help to edit my job application

Dear All,

I would like to full fill my application from on the section of Additional information which me considered to be

beneficial to application. (I apply in the position of marketing and inprovement services)

The detail as be low

I have interest in marketing filed especially CRM and Brand Loyalty, I believe that my experience , analytical skill and service mind, along with understanding of research methodology would contribute to this position.

I appreciate for all comments