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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
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I need your help to edit my abstract
Dear all, Could you please help me edit my abstract which a part of my thesis of alloed health science.
Please find the detail as below.
Abstract
The objective this research is to build the simulation of vascular system in the body for as learning media to help repeating lesson in anatomy of vascular and also related topics such as blood angiography.
The methodology research has been segmented as six parts, those are study of model structure, study of anatomy of vascular , drawing and vascular model design and also equipment and artificial organ supply to set
as model outline, evaluation and satisfaction of users. As a result, the model of blood vessel from neck area to thigh area which consist of copper tube with various size but heart, lung, and kidney that have been made from foam and have acrylic color and also keep in cubic light boxes which has width and length 30 and respectively.
More over, this model has been evaluated by specialist of anatomy and also 140 students of the faculty of applied health science. The result of accuracy comply with anatomy principle is good level, in term of learning media is good level and satisfaction of users is moderation level.
Conclusion, The model could show clearly in organ characteristics that could use as learning media and also It ‘s interest and easily model.
I appreciate for your all kind help
regards,
debangkok
Please find the detail as below.
Abstract
The objective this research is to build the simulation of vascular system in the body for as learning media to help repeating lesson in anatomy of vascular and also related topics such as blood angiography.
The methodology research has been segmented as six parts, those are study of model structure, study of anatomy of vascular , drawing and vascular model design and also equipment and artificial organ supply to set
as model outline, evaluation and satisfaction of users. As a result, the model of blood vessel from neck area to thigh area which consist of copper tube with various size but heart, lung, and kidney that have been made from foam and have acrylic color and also keep in cubic light boxes which has width and length 30 and respectively.
More over, this model has been evaluated by specialist of anatomy and also 140 students of the faculty of applied health science. The result of accuracy comply with anatomy principle is good level, in term of learning media is good level and satisfaction of users is moderation level.
Conclusion, The model could show clearly in organ characteristics that could use as learning media and also It ‘s interest and easily model.
I appreciate for your all kind help
regards,
debangkok
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I have had to guess at your 6 steps; they are unclear. You were also lacking one dimension of your box. Abstract The objective of this research is to construct a simulation of the human vascular system as a learning medium for anatomy lessons and related topics such as blood angiography.
- I have had to guess at your 6 steps; they are unclear.
- You were also lacking one dimension of your box.
- Abstract The objective of this research is to construct a simulation of the human vascular system as a learning medium for anatomy lessons and related topics such as blood angiography.
- The research methodology was in six parts: (1) study of model structure, (2) study of vascular anatomy , (3) drawing and vascular model design , (4) equipment , (5) artificial organ supply to set as model outline, and (6) evaluation and user satisfaction .
- The resulting model of blood vessels from the neck area to the thigh area consists of copper tubing of various diameters , while the heart, lungs and kidneys were constructed of foam.
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I have had to guess at your 6 steps; they are unclear. You were also lacking one dimension of your box.
Abstract
The objective of this research is to construct a simulation of the human vascular system as a learning medium for anatomy lessons and related topics such as blood angiography.
The research methodology
Abstract
The objective of this research is to construct a simulation of the human vascular system as a learning medium for anatomy lessons and related topics such as blood angiography.
The research methodology
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