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I advocate the notion that dancing plays an important role in a culture. As proverb says, dancing is integrated into a whole culture. People can construct their own culture by dance.

Dancing makes it possible for people to create a specific the way of life.
Cultural studies scholars studied how important dance is in specific race. They used the way of research to observe what role dance plays in people’s life. They perceived that dance really make a connection with their real life. Moreover, experts in cultural said that we should put dancing in perspective. They indicated that dance should be divided into two aspects to decipher -denotative meaning and connotative meaning. If we use denotative meaning to decipher a dance, dance should be regarded simply as a variety of body language and physical expression. But if we use connotative meaning to decipher it, we will unearth a wide variety of further information concealed from it. This information encompasses the method of thinking, traditional concept, and living attitude. These notions will pass on their next generation.

Dancing makes it possible for people to enjoy and enrich their real life.
One example involves Taiwanese aborigines. They hold the belief that dance not only preserve their distinct culture, but also inspire their. To reap an abundant harvest, they hold ceremonial dance at the end of year. To celebrate their children who reach an age of 18, they hold a grown-up dance in which these children have to perform their own talent for something that prove their sophisticated mental to take on more responsibilities. These kinds of ritual dance really enable Taiwanese aborigines to enhance their life’s dimension.