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Sooyun Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
I need your help ! Pls correct my formal letter ! It's Urgent !!
Sorry , My English is not good at all , so i don't know this letter has errors or not ! Pls help me find it 
Dear Sir ,
With due reverence , it is started that my name is Charmane and I am a french student of class 10 . I have got information about [ School's name] from your Website and this is one of those I am most interesting in. However, I do not know that you will accept an abroat student or not andI am writing to ask you to send me more informations about that .
I would be grateful if you could send me an application form , too .
Thank you for considering my request .
I am look forward to earing from you .
Yours faithfully
Charmane.
Dear Sir ,
With due reverence , it is started that my name is Charmane and I am a french student of class 10 . I have got information about [ School's name] from your Website and this is one of those I am most interesting in. However, I do not know that you will accept an abroat student or not andI am writing to ask you to send me more informations about that .
I would be grateful if you could send me an application form , too .
Thank you for considering my request .
I am look forward to earing from you .
Yours faithfully
Charmane.
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With due reverence [Rarely used, but OK] , it is started that my name is Charmane and I am a F rench student of class (see below) 10 . I have got information about [ School's name] from your Website (or website) and this is one of thos e I am most interest ed in. However, I do not know that whether you will accept a n abroa d foreign student or not and I am writing to ask you to send me more information s about that.
- With due reverence [Rarely used, but OK] , it is started that my name is Charmane and I am a F rench student of class (see below) 10 .
- I have got information about [ School's name] from your Website (or website) and this is one of thos e I am most interest ed in.
- However, I do not know that whether you will accept a n abroa d foreign student or not and I am writing to ask you to send me more information s about that.
- I would be grateful if you could send me an application form, too.
- Thank you for considering my request.
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With due reverence [Rarely used, but OK] , it is started that my name is Charmane and I am a French student of class (see below) 10 . I have got information about [ School's name] from your Website (or website) and this is one of those I am most interested in. However, I do not know that whether you will accept an abroad
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Class , i mean in Eng . Now My age is 15
Pls give me some advice , coz i feel embarrassed about that ><''
Pls give me some advice , coz i feel embarrassed about that ><''
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