I need your help, please check my poem

hi everybody,, I'm not a native speaker so I need your help to check my poem before I dedicate it to my love...



Believe me when I say I am blind to see..
anything but the love you have given me..
I tried more than once but could not conceal
the way you make me feel.

It opens a new world, that is so bright
and fills me with warmth in the gloomy night
It brings my heart to life when its blood congeals
the way you make me feel.

It is the light that shows me how to find
all my dreams and hopes that I left behind
It is the way to fall in love for real
the way you make me feel.

If my love for you is always forbidden
for it is the sin that won't be forgiven
I will give you the endless love that reveals
the way you make me feel.

thank you in advance..
bye