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Angel_miaca8 Posted 19 years ago
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i need your help please check my grammar
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00 When I was juvenile and faultless I never bothered what things are going on in my life, but as a young child my parent’s teach me to be a good, loving and caring girl who have a hope, ambition and desire, a girl who loved to smile and never forget to thank the Lord for all the blessings and now I was suddenly blooms to be a Lady. A Lady who is simple, God-fearing, trustworthy, and a loving person who loves to smile to everyone. 02 br
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00 Above all I would like to thank the Lord by giving me parents who are lovable, caring and always at my side, parents who develop me to grow as a simple yet a loving person. 02 br
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00 To my dearest “father and mother” thank you for everything, I will not grow like this if you are not here who loved, teach and guide me since birth and until now that I turn 18. 02 br
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00 To my brother and sister thank you for your support, loved and help even in time of trouble and for my friends, relatives and loved ones thank you for everything for all your care, loved and understanding. I’m very thankful and lucky for having all of you in my life! Thank you very much. 0-
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00 When I was juvenile and faultless I never bothered what things are going on in my life, but as a young child my parent’s teach me to be a good, loving and caring girl who have a hope, ambition and desire, a girl who loved to smile and never forget to thank the Lord for all the blessings and now I was suddenly blooms to be a Lady. A Lady who is simple, God-fearing, trustworthy, and a loving person who loves to smile to everyone. 02 br
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00 Above all I would like to thank the Lord by giving me parents who are lovable, caring and always at my side, parents who develop me to grow as a simple yet a loving person. 02 br
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00 To my dearest “father and mother” thank you for everything, I will not grow like this if you are not here who loved, teach and guide me since birth and until now that I turn 18. 02 br
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00 To my brother and sister thank you for your support, loved and help even in time of trouble and for my friends, relatives and loved ones thank you for everything for all your care, loved and understanding. I’m very thankful and lucky for having all of you in my life! Thank you very much. 0-
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0 When I was a baby I never worried about what was happening in my life, but as a young child my parents taught me to be a good, loving and caring girl. A girl who had hope and ambition and 00 (desire - I'd choose another word. Now I have bloomed into a Lady.
- 0 When I was a baby I never worried about what was happening in my life, but as a young child my parents taught me to be a good, loving and caring girl.
- A girl who had hope and ambition and 00 (desire - I'd choose another word.
- Now I have bloomed into a Lady.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I've changed your use of simple above as a description of your personality.
- I know you what you mean.
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0 When I was a baby I never worried about what was happening in my life, but as a young child my parents taught me to be a good, loving and caring girl. A girl who had hope and ambition and 00 (desire - I'd choose another word. This is usually taken to mean sexual desire, unless you spell out a desire for 'whatever) 00 who loved to smile and never forgot to thank the Lord for all her blessi
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0 thank you for your advice I really appreciate that hhehe thank you very much, i will changed that heheh thank you 02 br
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