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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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00 this is a paragraph whish I wrote. I will be grateful if. you read it and tell me if is ok or not and what are the mistakes I did.. 02 br
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00 There are a lot of things which we all own. Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive. Moreover, some can be the most valuable items. Of course that would differ from a person to another. The book "Don't be Sad " is my most valuable item I ever had although it does not cost me much. For me, it is the light in the darkness of this world. Whenever I feel sad, it is there to illuminate my sad heart .As soon as I start reading among its pages, I find the cure for all my pains . 00 In brief 00 , if I don’t have this book my life and thoughts would be so different. 02 br
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00 this is a paragraph whish I wrote. I will be grateful if. you read it and tell me if is ok or not and what are the mistakes I did.. 02 br
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00 thanks 02 br
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00 There are a lot of things which we all own. Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive. Moreover, some can be the most valuable items. Of course that would differ from a person to another. The book "Don't be Sad " is my most valuable item I ever had although it does not cost me much. For me, it is the light in the darkness of this world. Whenever I feel sad, it is there to illuminate my sad heart .As soon as I start reading among its pages, I find the cure for all my pains . 00 In brief 00 , if I don’t have this book my life and thoughts would be so different. 02 br
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0 Is this an assignment? 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 10 There are a lot of things which we all own. Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive.
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- 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 10 There are a lot of things which we all own.
- Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive.
- Moreover, some can be the most valuable items.
- Of course that would differ from a person to another.
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0 Is this an assignment? 02 br
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00 I suggest you get straight to the point and tell readers about your favorite book. 01 blockquote
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00 I suggest you get straight to the point and tell readers about your favorite book. 01 blockquote
01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 10 There are a lot of things which we all own. Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive. Moreover, some can be the most valuable items. Of
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