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Boryana Koparanova Posted 12 years ago
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While I was looking for information about the minimum wage I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes. The interview tells the story of yang single mom of four kids. The yang lady is near 30 years old and works for fast- food company from 2012 /the interview is made in July 2013/. She makes $7.35 per hour and works different hours a week – 20 or 27. The usual 5 days working week has 40 working hours. She couldn't do it because of the person there who manages the working time. After taxes each month the lady has between $400-$600 and her rent is $650 paid twice but not a full amount. There is no money left to buy clothes, shoes or something else. That yang women survives her way and I know there are a lot parents like her everywhere in the world.
That sad story provoked me to do a research for myself how many people are working for minimum wage.
While I was looking for information about the minimum wage I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes. The interview tells the story of yang single mom of four kids. The yang lady is near 30 years old and works for fast- food company from 2012 /the interview is made in July 2013/. She makes $7.35 per hour and works different hours a week – 20 or 27. The usual 5 days working week has 40 working hours. She couldn't do it because of the person there who manages the working time. After taxes each month the lady has between $400-$600 and her rent is $650 paid twice but not a full amount. There is no money left to buy clothes, shoes or something else. That yang women survives her way and I know there are a lot parents like her everywhere in the world.
That sad story provoked me to do a research for myself how many people are working for minimum wage.
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Okay, here are my suggestions (mostly in bold): While I was looking for information about the minimum wage , I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes . The interview tells the story of Y ang, a single mom with of four kids. Yang The yang lady is about near 30 years old and has worked for a fast- food company since from 2012 ( the interview is was made in July 2013 ) .
- Okay, here are my suggestions (mostly in bold): While I was looking for information about the minimum wage , I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes .
- The interview tells the story of Y ang, a single mom with of four kids.
- Yang The yang lady is about near 30 years old and has worked for a fast- food company since from 2012 ( the interview is was made in July 2013 ) .
- 35 per hour and works different hours a week – between 20 and or 27.
- The usual 5 day s working week has 40 working hours.
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Okay, here are my suggestions (mostly in bold):
While I was looking for information about the minimum wage, I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes. The interview tells the story of Yang, a single mom withof four kids. Yang The yang lady is about near 30 years old and has worked for a fa
While I was looking for information about the minimum wage, I found an interview by Laura Shin for Forbes. The interview tells the story of Yang, a single mom with
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