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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

I need your help!

Hi everybody! I have a sentence and I have to find 2 mistakes in this sentence... Someone plz help me!!

"For college admissions officers, the college board's plan to add the new writing section to the SAT brings a host of new questions ,and, possibly, an answer to the growing problem of college application essays so polished as to indicate that a student probably has extensive adult help."
  

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Hi, First, what do you think? Can you find anything that doesn't look right to you? Best wishes, Clive

  • Hi, First, what do you think?
  • Can you find anything that doesn't look right to you?
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

First, what do you think? Can you find anything that doesn't look right to you?

Best wishes, Clive
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I think I must correct " ..so polished" into " which is so polished" , right? But I still cant find the 2nd mistake!
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Hi,

"For college admissions officers, the college board's plan to add the new writing section to the SAT brings a host of new questions ,and, possibly, an answer to the growing problem of college application essays so polished as to indicate that a student probably has extensive adult help."

No, 'so polished' is OK. Actually, this is a pretty good se

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